Night of the Comet
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IMDB rating: 6.10 Plot: Two sisters, high school seniors in the early 1980s, awaken one morning to blood red skies and the realization that the human race has been wiped out. It becomes apparant that anyone who was not surrounded by steel when the Earth recently passed through the tail of Haley’s comet has been reduced to a pile of red ash (the trace elements of human chemical makeup.) They encounter a rebellious Native American man and take over the air waves at a local radio station in an attempt to get help. Unfortunately, they attract the attention of a group of scientists who knew what the effects of the comet would be. They hid underground in a steel laboratory, but idiotically left the vents open. Now, as various survivors of the comet who were only partially surrounded by steel are decaying into flesh-hungry zombies, the scientists are attempting to come up with a vaccine made of the blood of people who were not infected by the comet. Thus the trio must fight their way past not only roving packs of the cannibalistic dead, but also outsmart a pack of scientists desperate not to become that way themselves. |
Actors: Beltran Robert,Lewis Geoffrey,Fox Peter,Achorn John,Bowen Michael,Roth Ivan E.,Boyer Chance,Boyer Andrew,Comedy,Horror,Sci-Fi,Thriller,
Is my continuation of my story good? (best answer asap)?
okay, so im really trying to do my best for this sotra short story im writing (but i think its going to be a bit longer then i expected). on a previous question. i posted the intro/ first part of this story. i got a lot of comets telling me that the story was good but i needed to limit my detailing. ive had trouble fixing up this part, but i think i did okay. if u want to get picked Best Answer, go to my profile and read the question i wrote entitled "Is the beginning of my short story any good? Would you want to continue reading?" and read my beginning to this part ive posted beneath. ive edited it up on my good microsoft copy don’t worry if ive over detailed too much. if u do read my first part, at the beginning of ur answer type -read- if not, just tell me how you think i could improve this part.
Detective Harvey is seated in the police station, tapping his rough, short cut fingers along the rotted, wooden edge of the old police house desk. His hair is mid-length short but is covered by a worn out detective hat. No other town still use them, but the detective likes the old, rustic-like theme it brought out to the village.
The clock above him reads eleven o
